tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7644982314716236905.post5119550692267259030..comments2009-08-03T18:18:15.182-06:00mysticdavehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14479406738452321370noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7644982314716236905.post-19886652246048883472009-08-03T11:33:15.214-06:002009-08-03T11:33:15.214-06:00A very nice poem and very well summed up:<br />&quot;Peace begins unconditionally<br />with me, inside of me,<br />with myself.&quot;<br />These lines carry the very essence of your poem and also convey a very powerful message.Amritbir Kaurhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11421174480905206379noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7644982314716236905.post-86181010285483368842009-08-02T14:50:47.356-06:002009-08-02T14:50:47.356-06:00Very well expressed with a nice style.Poetic Shutterbughttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01856998108256408734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7644982314716236905.post-83406568043258385722009-07-31T19:23:36.435-06:002009-07-31T19:23:36.435-06:00Dave, this is a wonderful poem. There are many deep thoughts that you are clearly convey in your words. Great write!!Zuzanna Musialhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17366066446297771066noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7644982314716236905.post-35791258928041334682009-07-31T14:24:34.709-06:002009-07-31T14:24:34.709-06:00hollyoel001<br />Peace resided within in --beautiful and so true if only everyone felt that way maybe the world would be at peace-- great poem daveAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7644982314716236905.post-76093613694307957642009-07-31T13:08:29.556-06:002009-07-31T13:08:29.556-06:00&quot;We love all, that all may<br />know our peace.<br /><br />Peace of mind in our time.<br /><br />Peace begins unconditionally<br />with me, inside of me,<br />with myself.&quot;<br /><br />Wonderful! These 3 lines could be separate haiku styled poems.<br /><br />I wrote something similar called Keeping the Peace over at my poetry blog. Would love to see more people writing poems like you just did. Talk about spreading the word, and, by spreading the word, raise the awareness, raising the awareness creates the environment of Peace. Call it the Peace Ripple Effect! :)<br /><br />Thanks, Mystic Dave, you rock!Denny Lyonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02241236746343420066noreply@blogger.com